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Mon May 18, 2009, 8:30 AM
  • Mood: Pleased
  • Listening to: Gallows
  • Reading: Nutting
  • Watching: Nutting
  • Playing: Nutting
  • Eating: Nutting
  • Drinking: Nutting
Surf’s whistling echoed through his mind like an alarm clock in a cavern. Loud, spontaneous, incoherent notes, slowly driving the wolf to the brink of insanity, and all the time the hedgehog was strolling around the room, ever visible in the corners of the wolf’s eyes as he tried desperately to concentrate.
Breathing deeply, Madidus closed the volume he had been reading and looked towards the hedgehog, who to his surprise was staring him directly in the face and grinning like some ecstasy driven Cheshire cat.
“Would you please stop that whistling? I’m trying to concentrate.”
Surf grunted, clearly pleased that he had gained the annoyed wolf’s attention.
“On what? When are we ever going to need to fight a rampaging, demonic synonym?”
Madidus cringed as he placed the thesaurus on the table next to him. “Excuse me for wanting to expand my vocabulary.”
Surf put his hands behind his head, lent backwards and laughed out loud. “You have to be the most boring wolf on the face of the planet!”
Madidus’ fist began to shake as the hedgehog’s eyes began to water. Just one punch, he thought; Senie wouldn’t mind that. Hell, Surf might even look better with a few less teeth. After all, it would be an excuse to get some nice gold ones, maybe even silver! Yeah, they’d be great for fighting monsters. Mad would be helping the team out! Just one hit- just one, just one…
“I mean, we fight demons, we have access to advanced magic and technology, half of which we haven’t even tested out at the shooting range yet and you’re in here reading a thesaurus? If you ever want some excitement in your life we can always head outside and watch the grass grow!”
“Ok, that’s it!” Madidus yelled as he leapt forward, reaching for Surf’s throat. Surf hopped backwards, dodging the wolf’s clumsy blows easily. He giggled to himself; Madidus had always been easy to tease when angry.
“Come here you little-“
“Boys!”
Suddenly the he froze. The two of them turned to find Senie strolling towards them, tutting as if she were viewing two children having an argument over a piece of candy.
“What do you think you’re doing? We’re supposed to be a team here!”
Madidus trembled, not out of fear but out of embarrassment. “But Senie he-“
“No ‘buts’!” she shouted. “I don’t care how this argument started, I’m going to finish it!”
Madidus gulped. Senie was around two foot smaller than him and yet she had an undeniable sense of authority about her that reminded him on a daily basis just why she was the leader of the three of them.
He looked at Surf, who seemed to be taking full advantage of the wolf’s humiliation, stretching out his arms for a hug and pouting playfully. At that moment, Madidus would have given anything to be somewhere else. Even fighting a rampaging demonic synonym was more appealing than this!
“I’m sowwey Mad, let’s hug and make up.”
Madidus stepped back and flashed his teeth.
“You’ve got to be kidding me.”
Suddenly, without warning Surf jumped forward and wrapped his arms tightly around Madidus. Senie grinned. “There we go, friends again!”
Madidus ignored her. He raised his arms to push the hedgehog away, but he on held tightly.
“Surf, get off of me!”
“Oh, but you’re so soft!”
Mad continued to struggle. He was close to clawing the hedgehog’s eyes out when he heard Senie giggling. Turning to face her, he saw her holding up a parchment that immediately sent the wolf’s spirits sky high.
“Work? You found us some work?!?!”
She nodded. “Yep, so lets be ready to head out in about-“she measured, looking at her wrist watch. “-ten minutes.”
With that, she turned to walk away. Surf quickly let go, clumsily waving goodbye as he sped off to prepare. Mad sighed with relief. He wouldn’t have wanted to admit it, but ‘expanding his vocabulary’ had been just as boring as Surf had suggested and he was glad to finally have something to do, even if he had lost his pride for now.
Senie laughed silently to herself as she heard the two of them speed away.
“Those boys of mine.”


Anyone who's already read this, i'm submitting as a journal so i can get some extra constructive criticism from any passers by before i submit it, and the subsequent chapters i'm planning, as a larger story.
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Zombie-ish? T_T

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I see a world of cartoons, of images and light laid out by unknown giants, and I feel a careless joy.
I see a photograph, an unmoving box of reality, and my world vanishes, leaving me a lonely giant, longing for the naivity i've lost.
I"M KIDDING. 8DDDDDDDD

We're all zombies. |3

DSHGFDSIHFDSOIHGDSIGHOISDJF. Cept' me, I'mma vampire. >3 :iconvampireplz:

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I'm Gigimon in dA's Digimon Crew. 8D
Surf’s whistling echoed through his mind like an alarm clock in a cavern. Loud, spontaneous, incoherent notes, slowly driving the wolf to the brink of insanity, and all the time the hedgehog was strolling around the room, ever visible in the corners of the wolf’s eyes as he tried desperately to concentrate.
Breathing deeply, Madidus closed the volume he had been reading and looked towards the hedgehog, who to his surprise was staring him directly in the face and grinning like some ecstasy driven Cheshire cat.
“Would you please stop that whistling? I’m trying to concentrate.”
Surf grunted, clearly pleased that he had gained the annoyed wolf’s attention.
“On what? When are we ever going to need to fight a rampaging, demonic synonym?”
Madidus cringed as he placed the thesaurus on the table next to him. “Excuse me for wanting to expand my vocabulary.”
Surf put his hands behind his head, lent backwards and laughed out loud. “You have to be the most boring wolf on the face of the planet!”
Madidus’ fist began to shake as the hedgehog’s eyes began to water. Just one punch, he thought; Senie wouldn’t mind that. Hell, Surf might even look better with a few less teeth. After all, it would be an excuse to get some nice gold ones, maybe even silver! Yeah, they’d be great for fighting monsters. Mad would be helping the team out! Just one hit- just one, just one…
“I mean, we fight demons, we have access to advanced magic and technology, half of which we haven’t even tested out at the shooting range yet and you’re in here reading a thesaurus? If you ever want some excitement in your life we can always head outside and watch the grass grow!”
“Ok, that’s it!” Madidus yelled as he leapt forward, reaching for Surf’s throat. Surf hopped backwards, dodging the wolf’s clumsy blows easily. He giggled to himself; Madidus had always been easy to tease when angry.
“Come here you little-“
“Boys!”
Suddenly the he froze. The two of them turned to find Senie strolling towards them, tutting as if she were viewing two children having an argument over a piece of candy.
“What do you think you’re doing? We’re supposed to be a team here!”
Madidus trembled, not out of fear but out of embarrassment. “But Senie he-“
“No ‘buts’!” she shouted. “I don’t care how this argument started, I’m going to finish it!”
Madidus gulped. Senie was around two foot smaller than him and yet she had an undeniable sense of authority about her that reminded him on a daily basis just why she was the leader of the three of them.
He looked at Surf, who seemed to be taking full advantage of the wolf’s humiliation, stretching out his arms for a hug and pouting playfully. At that moment, Madidus would have given anything to be somewhere else. Even fighting a rampaging demonic synonym was more appealing than this!
“I’m sowwey Mad, let’s hug and make up.”
Madidus stepped back and flashed his teeth.
“You’ve got to be kidding me.”
Suddenly, without warning Surf jumped forward and wrapped his arms tightly around Madidus. Senie grinned. “There we go, friends again!”
Madidus ignored her. He raised his arms to push the hedgehog away, but he on held tightly.
“Surf, get off of me!”
“Oh, but you’re so soft!”
Mad continued to struggle. He was close to clawing the hedgehog’s eyes out when he heard Senie giggling. Turning to face her, he saw her holding up a parchment that immediately sent the wolf’s spirits sky high.
“Work? You found us some work?!?!”
She nodded. “Yep, so lets be ready to head out in about-“she measured, looking at her wrist watch. “-ten minutes.”
With that, she turned to walk away. Surf quickly let go, clumsily waving goodbye as he sped off to prepare. Mad sighed with relief. He wouldn’t have wanted to admit it, but ‘expanding his vocabulary’ had been just as boring as Surf had suggested and he was glad to finally have something to do, even if he had lost his pride for now.
Senie laughed silently to herself as she heard the two of them speed away.
“Those boys of mine.”

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I see a world of cartoons, of images and light laid out by unknown giants, and I feel a careless joy.
I see a photograph, an unmoving box of reality, and my world vanishes, leaving me a lonely giant, longing for the naivity i've lost.
I love it Sat~ 8DDDDDDD

Madidus is so awesome. XD

Your writing style is epic- I envy you. |3

:dance:

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I'm Gigimon in dA's Digimon Crew. 8D
Yeah he is ^_^
I enjoy writing about people who are annoyed :P

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I see a world of cartoons, of images and light laid out by unknown giants, and I feel a careless joy.
I see a photograph, an unmoving box of reality, and my world vanishes, leaving me a lonely giant, longing for the naivity i've lost.
Lol which one am i?

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I see a world of cartoons, of images and light laid out by unknown giants, and I feel a careless joy.
I see a photograph, an unmoving box of reality, and my world vanishes, leaving me a lonely giant, longing for the naivity i've lost.
Uuuuuuuuuuh....

Whichever one you want to be. |D

:icondragonspif:

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I'm Gigimon in dA's Digimon Crew. 8D
lol tbh i got the idea for the short story i sent you yesterday from the dragons
/^_^

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I see a world of cartoons, of images and light laid out by unknown giants, and I feel a careless joy.
I see a photograph, an unmoving box of reality, and my world vanishes, leaving me a lonely giant, longing for the naivity i've lost.
DRAGONS INSPIRE. :iconimhighplz:

...Come to think of it, a lot of them remind me of Madidus and Surf. X"D

:icondragonspin1::icondragonspin2: <---Like that. x3

:icondragontailfaster: <----That for Surf. |D ( Surf: What are you doing Maaaaad~~~? 83 *watches intently and innocently* )

:icondragonerrplz: <---That for Madidus |3 ( Mad:...Nothing. =w=; )

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I'm Gigimon in dA's Digimon Crew. 8D

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